She wakes up every morning for us. She gets out of bed, cooks breakfast, washes the dishes, gets the kids dressed for school. It all seemed to be routine day by day. My mom always is the first up in the morning, and when I come downstairs into the kitchen for breakfast, she's always there with a warm smile as she drinks her coffee and watches the news. A tall glass of orange juice sits on the counter along with pancakes or an omelette or waffles depending on the day.
One morning I walked down the stairs from my bedroom into the kitchen. I expected my mom to be there with that glass of orange juice and pancakes (my mom always makes pancakes on Monday mornings). I walked back to her bedroom to see if she was still sleeping, and surely enough there she was. I asked her if she was feeling okay because it wasn't normal for me to ever be up before her. She said she felt sick so I told her to stay in bed and that I could handle the cooking for the morning.
I turned the stove on and put the pan on the burner. I go to the cabinet and get the flour and sugar and then to the fridge to get the butter and milk. I mix it all in a bowl and pour the mix onto the hot pan. It all seems to be going well until I try to flip the pancake. The pancake was sticking to the pan and I couldn't scrape it off. Before I knew it the cooked side of the pancake turned as black as night. My mom smelled the burnt pancakes from her room and came out to see what was going on. She saw that I was having a lot of trouble. Turns out I need my mom more than I thought.
This poem is a great mothers day poem. I liked how you have imagery of orange juice, omelettes, and pancakes. The part with the pancake sticking to the pan was funny, and I thought it was an important part of the story. Good job!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the imagery! I can picture a nice Sunday morning with all of the great breakfast mornings. I agree with HuanD this is a great mothers day. This vignette gives a great sense of warmth and happiness!
ReplyDeleteOlivia, this vignette is so sweet I love it! I could imagine all the food on the table and I could smell the pancakes and eggs while reading this. I agree with you that sometimes I don't always realize that I need my mom more than I thought. But, even when there sick and not feeling well they will always be there for you to help you out! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love this vignette, especially because it was Mother's Day when you wrote it! I admire how the unspoken appreciation you have for your mother is revealed at the end of the vignette, after the story has been told. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis vignette is perfect for mother's day. I love the last line about how you needed your mom more than you thought, and even though your breakfast idea didn't work out, I'm sure your mom appreciated the effort. Awesome job!!!
ReplyDeleteI love this vignette! I love how you can truly see your appreciation for your mom, even when you don't think you need her. Well done!
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